I liked the idea, but you should improve your art & animation and spend more time on it then 5 hours.
Voice is fine, expect for the girl.
Sorry this is just a solo project. no girls here in my house so I just made my voice high-pitched. XD
I really made the art simple and cartoonish, while animation... still improving.
Thanks for review!
The animation wasn't that good, but the story and voice acting were very good.
Good luck with future animations :)
1 point for effort
1. You litteraly just took the idea from animator vs animation.
2. The recording quality is very bad.
3. The stickfigure doesn't move fluidly.
4. There is no sound.
Sorry im not tht good at animating im in 6 below grade
2 for effort
If you're making a game "get to the ending with your cursor" game atleast make the graphics interesting and add some nice music in the background. 1 thing that was good is that you added these red cubes going over in a specific level.
The bloks stay the same al the time...
you should bring variance in the bloks location on the screen, placing them every time again on the same place makes the game boring because, well i constantly have to click the same places.
The creeper at the ending looked a bit weird, their legs are under their body, not next to it.
The creeper was drawn symbolicly, like a dick.
Expect for the hitboxes (already even said under me) for the spikes are to big, it's the only thing that pisses me of, but not counting that this is a fun game to play for everyone.
I really recommend this to people who like to play physics or puzzle games
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